hei zheling, thanks for tag with: review mentors will come and review, soon! :D ps: è un lavoro interessante su cui riflettere, perchè è un'immagine piena di potenzialità....
pier | 1 year(s) ago
Thank you Pier! I think this new tag "review" is a nice value added for koinup community. I'm looking forward to mentor's tips and reviews!! p.s. Una cosa interessante potrebbe essere quella di inserire, successivamente, una seconda copia della foto, modificata secondo i suggerimenti dei mentors. Sarebbe bello poter confrontare il "prima e dopo la cura". Magari basterebbe aggiungere un tag "reviewed"! Potrebbe essere anche uno spunto per eventuali tutorials sviluppati pubblicamente e con la partecipazione di più utenti. E' solo un idea buttata lì :-)
zheling | 1 year(s) ago
è ottima! e mi trovo pienamente d'accordo! se ne hai voglia, puoi parlarne con trixibelle http://www.koinup.com/trixibelle/ per vedere se si riesce a fare..... io poi, se siete d'accordo , correggo il post del blog....in modo da inserire anche questa opzione....
Ho mandato un messaggio a Trixibelle. Ci teniamo aggiornati :-)
wow! a great picture...it is very well done but the sunlight on the avatar may be a little too bright and too harsh and does not seem to match the waves behind it, some softening will take care of that...also some blending or smudging between the wave itself and the water at the bottom to smoothen the transition will greatly increase the sense of realism and make the water look less like two separate objects. Other than that this is a great picture and it is apparent that a lot of detail work has gone into it! great:)
Rhondita | 1 year(s) ago
Thank you Rhondita!! You're right with your tips. I agree, totally! Four eyes are much better then two! :-)) Thx again!
;-)
yes I agree with Rhonda...if you look at pictures of surfers in waves they look quite dark and you look a bit stuck on. There should possibly also be some dodging and burning throughout the wave to make it appear as if its rolling with light and shade, it looks slightly flat. But the detail is amazing...you are always good Zheling xx
Trixibelle | 1 year(s) ago
good image! I see what You are trying to match here, but it may need some effort from Your side to make it as perfect as the look and feel I got here. I see Jaggies [ http://www.dpreview.com/learn/?/key=jaggies ] which may be caused by increasing (or decreasing ) the number of pixels in a digital image. my tips are: don't increase any image unless You know what exactly You are doing, just try to keep it at it's size, or may be decrease it when it is needed. And for the blurry text for that You should learn how to get the photo from first as a high res. Also don't rasterize Your Type layer in photoshop ( which has the T letter in it ) unless it is really needed! .. You can scale Your type layer by as You want because normally type are scalable cause it is paths,but that doesn't apply on bitmaps images. further reading: http://www.dpreview.com/learn/?/key=interpolation design wise I guess the bottom corner is not matching .. the frame is not matching too. Your personal brand at right bottom needs some polishing as well. tips: 1.write Your personal brand by your hands, or work a bit on some font from dafont.com may be. 2.Also for the bottom left image .. after you make sure you have the rights to use it, try to get it high res, and place it in a better place in your composition, it is not a good idea to put in this place those guys while they are looking out of the design space, that would move the viewer eye outside. 3.The frame may match if it got a texture from the image itself, may be the inky jeans? may be water bubbles.. may be even the hair texture.
donhosho | 1 year(s) ago
@Trixi Thank you Trixi. I'm wondering how to realize yours and Rhondita's tips. I hope to post a reviewed shot asap. Man at work :-) @donhosho Wow donhosho!! Your one is a great tutorial!! You should post it as a storyboard with samples, or a text tutorial anyway. I'm going to visit the sites you told me, to solve problems with chars and resolution. Very, very important tips. Thank you so much!!
you very welcome zheling, may be i can make a tutorial about it some day :)
I love this pic, it seems taken by one of those magazines of sport that are found in newspaper kiosk!! If I must find a defect, personally I don't love particularly the signature in low to the right (but it's just my opinion ;) ) p.s. fa figo scrivere in inglese, peccato che mi sono fatta tradurre tutto dalla Violent XD
Kady | 1 year(s) ago
Thanks Kady! That's the "look and feel" I was looking for.... a 60's/70's taste :-) The signature is the product of my ignorance in Photoshop :-) Take a look at the donhosho's tips; they are the solution and i will follow them. p.s. LOL!! Con il mio inglese maccheronico, spero di non dire troppe strxxxxte :-)
Bellissima!
MedeAthena | 1 year(s) ago
I like this shot a lot but, for me, it seems to lack action. I'm a surfer and it doesn't really make me feel like I'm there. I feel like the shot needs more tension, to be angled more, give it more action, let the wave be overwhelming - get the tip of the board in my face, let me look up at the surfer instead of just at him. Make me ride the wave. And graphically, I agree with Don, the guys in the bottom left shouldn't be looking out of the frame and, since you can't easily change their shot, maybe move them to the bottom right and flop your image so he's riding into the frame from the left instead of the right. Finally, your headline feels a bit lost, I'd darken it up and give it a bit more graphic weight (another font perhaps? Something a little more dynamic?).
Kee | 1 year(s) ago
Thanks Kee! All your suggestions are precious. Now, looking at all the mentor's tips, including your one, the problem to solve is the technical way to realize the new version of the photo. I was thinking about a b&w solution, without movie pictures or remindings to "BigWednesday". The b&w should help me to have more "drama", maybe with a blur on focus, or move effects..... I don't know....:-)....Everyone told me about the lack in action and realism. Now, the problem is "how to reach with techical efforts the result I've got in my mind? " I suppose this means to learn :-) Thanks again!!
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