pub. on feb 25, 2008 Second LifeTutorial - Guide - Story What If You...
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What if you
Could wish me away
What if you
Spoke those words today

I wonder if you'd miss me
When I'm gone
It's come to this, release me
I'll leave before the dawn

But for tonight
I'll stay here with you
Yes, for tonight
I'll lay here with you

But when the sun
Hits your eyes
Through your window
There'll be nothing you can do

"What If You" --- Joshua Radin


beautiful but sad......

View Grazia's home Grazia | 13 year(s) ago

I agree with Grazia, its a sad story, but you did a great job with photos and setting!

View SL7's home SL7 | 13 year(s) ago

great storyboard, I love expecially the second frame and the sad eyes of the girl...

View Silvia's home Silvia | 13 year(s) ago

Beautiful work, Torrid.

View rykerbeck's home rykerbeck | 13 year(s) ago

the storyline is simple but very beautiful done!

View mforiero's home mforiero | 13 year(s) ago

omg.... so sad storry, how can i endure that???

View balduinaabye's home balduinaabye | 13 year(s) ago

Thanks for commenting everyone :). This is the first time I used the storyboard feature but considering this was a 3 photo series I felt it would help to keep them connected. I guess it goes without saying it's a visual to go with the song but there is much more that could be told. There is a sadness to it but I also find it to be a sort of "last" expression of love.

View Torrid's home Torrid | 13 year(s) ago

*sobs* So beautiful and sad!

View Nikalu's home Nikalu | 13 year(s) ago

Ohhh so sad and touching! It's a great work, I love the girl's expression in the second frame...her eyes have lots of feeling, you caught the perfect look.

View MedeAthena's home MedeAthena | 13 year(s) ago

Mhm. Touching.

View Aimz's home Aimz | 13 year(s) ago

There isnt much more that I could add to the comments already.. but this touched me. very nice work Torrid.

View KimberlyMirabeau's home KimberlyMirabeau | 13 year(s) ago


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