hey well so suggestions hmmm....its a really good concept for a photo nice use of black background and portraiture lighting, however theres a lot of negative space around the piture that our eyes wander accros, again i would crop teh picture down till you just have the area of interest in teh frame, i woudl then maybe use some dodge and burning techniques just to accentuate a few shadows and highlights on her face only slightly as tehliht is kinda diffuse i guess...but yeah nice use of pose and lighting and colour combination for hair and top i hope this helps....hugs kali :D