pub. on Jun 07, 2008 Second LifeTutorial - Guide - Story Broken Heart
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Night was falling like every evening before... Standing on her balcony she watched the sunset over the ocean, so beautiful and overwhelming - as if nothing had happened...

 
 
 

 
 
 
She left the house, her steps leading to the small Cafe down the brick path - and she sat down at the Table for Two, just like last night...

 
 
 

 
 
 
But it wasn`t the same, everything was different now, she was alone...

Leaning forward her eyes were watching the waves, glistening under the last powerful sunbeams, the air still warm after that sunny day - but she couldn`t feel the warmth and jumped up restless

 
 
 

 
 
 
Walking around the corner, she stopped and stared into the darkening waters of the small canal - trying to see a reflection next to hers in the gentle waves, but... no... there was only her...

 
 
 

 
 
 
She reached the peaceful marketplace and found it lovely and inviting as every day before, she always loved the warm feel of that charming place, like a gentle beating heart...

 
 
 

 
 
 
She leaned against the corner, feeling the last sunlight warm on her skin for a short moment... A cat strolled around the place in the distance, catlike with no sign of any hurry or destination, looking so happy and content...

 
 
 

 
 
 
Shivering suddenly she left the place, only wishing that cold emptiness deep inside would go away - she walked through the small passage to the ocean, hearing only her own heartbeat in the shadows and golden twilight...

 
 
 

 
 
 
Then she found herself in that same room like the night before and she sat down, her back to the wall - the doors were open and she could hear the waves outside, singing their own neverending song...

Memories, so many memories ran through her mind, laughter, happiness, love, satisfaction - hours passed by and different thoughts captured her mind, not as bright and wonderful, dispair, anger, frustrated hope and broken dreams...

 
 
 

 
 
 
The loud sound of the bell from the marketplace made her raise her head and suddenly she opened her eyes wide - yes, she was alone... But...

 
 
 

 
 
 
No more waiting for hours sitting by the phone, no more shattered hopes, no more broken promises, no more lies and excuses... She took a deep breath and stood up, leaving the shadows behind her and looking outside into the promising, bright dawn of a new day

 
 
 

 
 
 
And she knew... Some day, soon, she would dance in sunlight again - as if nothing had happened.

 
 
 

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Emvee Cuba

A story about lost love - and a walk from the shadows into the light

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hey carlotta, if the story is settled in Cuba, you can submit to the contest
http://www.koinup.com/contest/emveecuba/
;D


View pier's home pier | 1 year(s) ago

great story! good luck for the contest!


View pier's home pier | 1 year(s) ago

thank you Pier :-))


View CarlottaCeawlin's home CarlottaCeawlin | 1 year(s) ago

love it, texts and pics wtg ! waiting for more ;-)


View Ulrik_Asbrink's home Ulrik_Asbrink | 1 year(s) ago

wonderful, wonderful photos...I love the warm colours and the romantic scenery:) and the story is at first sad but then hopeful and promising...it really touches my heart:) this is simply awesome:)


View Rhondita's home Rhondita | 1 year(s) ago

Ohhh so sad...and then....lovely ending. Beautiful work as ever Carlotta


View Trixibelle's home Trixibelle | 1 year(s) ago

Thank you Ulrik, Rhondita and Trixi, glad you like it :-)


View CarlottaCeawlin's home CarlottaCeawlin | 1 year(s) ago

Great work, Carlotta!


View zheling's home zheling | 1 year(s) ago

Thank you Zheling :-)


View CarlottaCeawlin's home CarlottaCeawlin | 1 year(s) ago

Just great, I know the place, I can relate to your story...thanks for the nice pictures and text

http://philippechaplin.skyrock.com/5.html
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View PhilippeChaplin's home PhilippeChaplin | 1 year(s) ago

Thanx to you, Philippe :-)


View CarlottaCeawlin's home CarlottaCeawlin | 1 year(s) ago

Wow this is so lovely done ... just perfect


View Eves_Rodenberger's home Eves_Rodenberger | 1 year(s) ago

Thank you so much Eves!


View CarlottaCeawlin's home CarlottaCeawlin | 1 year(s) ago

lovely series of shots and story to go with it :)


View BBeau's home BBeau | 1 year(s) ago

Thanx Bbeau, glad you like it :-)


View CarlottaCeawlin's home CarlottaCeawlin | 1 year(s) ago

Love the light in these story!


View Silvia's home Silvia | 1 year(s) ago

Thank you Silvia! ^^


View CarlottaCeawlin's home CarlottaCeawlin | 1 year(s) ago

WOW! This story is great...


View Corale's home Corale | 1 year(s) ago

Glad you like it, thank you! :-)


View CarlottaCeawlin's home CarlottaCeawlin | 1 year(s) ago

Oh lovely story! *_*


View Kady's home Kady | 1 year(s) ago

The color and light is fantastic and I really like the way you frame her. The story isn't just about her it's about the place too. Placemaking in everyway.

Cool. Sierra


View Sierra's home Sierra | 1 year(s) ago

Thank you Kady and Sierra, I appreciate all your kind feedback very much!


View CarlottaCeawlin's home CarlottaCeawlin | 1 year(s) ago

Nice Job :) !!!


View LunaScarlatta's home LunaScarlatta | 1 year(s) ago

Thanx Luna! :-)


View CarlottaCeawlin's home CarlottaCeawlin | 1 year(s) ago

Beautiful photo's and a very touching story ... Great work! :)


View Maiyya's home Maiyya | 1 year(s) ago

Thank you very much, Maiyya :-)


View CarlottaCeawlin's home CarlottaCeawlin | 1 year(s) ago

Omg!!! *___*
Wonderful work, Carlotta!!! Light, pictures, colors and words are perfectly mixed up... it seems an "out-of-time" story, but at the same time it is strongly real...


View Morgana_le_fay's home Morgana_le_fay | 1 year(s) ago

Many Thanx Morgana! I guess, that sort of story happens often enough... it was my intention to show the way from darkness and dispair into light and hope - very glad you like it :-)


View CarlottaCeawlin's home CarlottaCeawlin | 1 year(s) ago

Just to let you know that I've chosen this photo for inclusion in Contact Sheet, an irregular column of selected SL photos, on my blog Around the Grid with Harper.


View HarperGanesvoort's home HarperGanesvoort | 10 month(s) ago



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